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[Zombie Creator]

Because the effort is there

I thik you did a great job putting this together, Sure the graphics could be improved and I think you should try and strive to do that or even get help from a better artist, but I think your idea is a cool one and this idea could certainly be developed further. I liked what you did and the effort you put forth in making it so your getting my 4/8. I hope it will encourage you to keep working at it and improve it further.

[Flash Game Tutorial 101]

Not too shabby

This is definately going to help those who are looking to do these basics of game development. One suggestion and I think it is an important one when ever you talk about movement for a character...

in the root create a speed var like this

movespeed = 4;

Then use this var in your code....so instead of using

if (Key.isDown(Key.right){
this._x -=5;
}

use this

if (Key.isDown(Key.right){
this._x -= _root.movespeed;
}

in this way you can change the speed of movement by simply changing the var, this also comes in handy if you plan in your game to have the character slow down when moving through water or mud or speed up if they get a power boost or something. Just gives you more control over the speed and movement should you need it.

Just something to consider.

xHeavyMetalx responds:

Yea, I will for sure in the future. Thanks for reviewing

[Soul Search]

I liked it

For this type of game it is the best I have seen. Kudos on taking it to this level of play. Really nice job

[Kil-Pop]

Not too bad for first game

I like that you give out a reward system, it makes you want to play it again to try to get to the next award.

Some suggestions would be to add some sort of added abilitites to your popper. Maybe if you pop a red ballon you get an arm extention on the top or bottom. Anything to add to the game play would be cool.

Bakariboss responds:

Wow a real deal game designer! I'm actually in school for game design right now. Thanks for the input. :D

[Aquarotation]

Nice game

Great game and fun to play. I thought the storyline was comical and the whole thing was put together nicely.

[Phrozenflame RPG]

Great job

Awesome game. There was a lot of slow moments and such and a little glitchy on some of the mini games, but over-all it was a great peice. This isn't really my kind of RPG, but I can recognize the hard work that went into this and I think you all did great on it. Thanks for sharing your hard efforts and I had a lot of fun playing it. I think that says it all.

[SOL: Dawn]

This was a great game

There were a few small bugs or improvements on exits and stuff, like sometimes you could push so far up you would disappear off the screen and pressing the space button didn't activate the switch to the next screen, you had to come back down. I realy liked how you did this. It was simple and fun to play. From one RPG flash game dev to another, great job. I haven't finished it completely yet but I got to the king at the sunken...well you know. :) I will come back to finish later. Thanks for making such a great game and sharing it with us. Your hard efforts and time really shows.

[Ally the Alien]

Great game

Fun and addicting. Yeah advertisements are a bother, but most people do not understand that it takes time to make quality games for others to enjoy. People just can't sit around and develop games for free, unless you still living with your parents. As long as a game doesn't pop ads in a new window I don't mind waiting a few moments to get to play a free game. At least I know that the developer will get something for the hard work they put in. Great job. Simple but fun game to play.

[Dodo Hunt]

Decent shoot game but way to easy

The art work in this game is pretty good and you can tell some effort went into making it. I normally suck at these games and I tore this thing up...so I can tell you right now its way too easy. I enjoyed playing it though and from that point of view I think the game is a success. Good luck with it.

[Xiotex Studios Juggler]

Fun

Simple but great. Would like to see you develop it more. The levels is a good idea. You might add more balls at higher levels to add dificulty...and then you could also add like special powers to your cursor like destroyer....while playing at a higher level a square might appear and if you hit with your cursor it changes to the destroyer cursor....the next ball you hit you can make disappear. Something like that....anyays cool game.

Xiotex responds:

I like your thinking.